Review the draft below and provide specific feedback on [QUALITY CRITERIA, such as clarity, relevance, persuasiveness, structure, or tone]. Identify what is working, what is unclear or unsupported, and whether additional examples or context would improve it. For every issue, propose a concrete revision.
Draft:
[DRAFT]
Then review the same draft from the perspective of [AUDIENCE OR STAKEHOLDER]. Explain how that person is likely to interpret it, what questions or objections they may have, and what changes would make the draft more useful or credible for them.
Context:
[CONTEXT]
Return: strengths, priority issues, audience-perspective findings, recommended revisions, and a revised version.